All Comments on 'The Game'

Well written with unusual twists.

What a reeking load of shit as told. The only redeeming aspect you could have taken was to reveal them as a married couple seeking to jack up their love life

What a load of shit.

How badly did he hurt her? Because after her abuse of him both physically and verbally, I can't imagine any man not hurting her before throwing her manipulative ass out the door.

I'm glad you liked the story so much! I've been a long time lurker here at Lit and this is my first submission and it's really great getting feedback. Especially positive feedback ;)

I probably already have more ideas than time, but story requests would be very welcome. Stay tuned!

I truly enjoyed how she toyed with him but did not inflict too much pain on him. It is a beautiful thing when a woman takes control. Deep down men love this.