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Telugu1Telugu1about 4 years ago

loved it, just one suggestion, could you make it obvious when the POV has changed rather than just an asterisk, just put the name of the POV the following section is from. Just a thought. I love this multi-perspective thing and the story was very arousing in its own right.

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