by pujalata980
Very hot series. The last two parts relied more on Radha and Jia rather than Geeta and Jia, but i think the eroticism was well maintained.
The lovers should have been unified. Still I think it is a really hot story.
The end of this story was very unlike Pujalata980 stories. Still the experience was brilliant.
Geeta was right in the conclusion but I think in the genre of erotic literature the introduction of such emotional feelings has no issues. But still a very hot and erotic content.
Superb story but I didn't like that the lovers got separated. Please unite them again in a future story.
Next time try the role reversal.
Let submissive character get pleasure and make the Dominant one the pleasure giver
Since you have mentioned Shreya Sinha of "She swept me away" in this story I suggest you write a story involving Shreya and Jia and maybe someone from the orphanage.
Please try more stories involving a rich housewife or college girl with a fisherwoman/vegetable seller/flower seller etc