All Comments on 'The Gardner Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Why

Would any husband want this?

sweet4chocolatesweet4chocolateover 14 years ago
what?

dammit why did you end the story...grrrrrr lol write more please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loved it

as 39 year old married woman...I would love to be in Bonnie's position

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
so hott

hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

good beginning but need to have some sort of transitional material to complete the encounter and/or set up for additional chapters (if you wish to continue or complete the story)

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