All Comments on 'The Golden Serpent Pt. 07: Handjob of Glory'

This is designed to be the precursor of a bigger story. You wrapped this up too quickly, it left one wanting more.

Hopefully one day you actually get around to continuing what you want to write with this story arc.

But maybe not.

Scores 5/5

Thanks for the comments Wargamer, much appreciated! Admittedly, I did the rush the ending of this multi-parter - I think attempting something on this scale was a little ambitious at the time. Having said that, I would like to revisit those same characters in future works, now that they are a little more fleshed out.

I enjoyed the story

Thanks goo_neig! Glad you enjoyed it.