All Comments on 'The Good Neighbor'

by Howag

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MessagesFriskedMessagesFriskedalmost 2 years ago

Creative, original, and too short. I hope to see it become a series, with more substance in each part. Add an episode about the grad students involved in the research, Some history of the institute's previous studies and perhaps some notorious anecdotes.

Then build on each character, by placing them in new interactions and objectives.

If you wanted me to be frustrated & wanting more from the scenario, you accomplished your goal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

you could continue this, make it longer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Totally stupid story plot and poorly written. Nothing about this story is riviting and compelling to be read. Was bored right out of the gate........ No hook, driving one to read on...... No one would care if they did tell the story if it was real as it was tasteless and dumb that this would be the dream by either party. What a waste of 2 minutes everyone will never get back.

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