All Comments on 'The Gravel Pit'

Stock up on wine coolers, aids test kits and pregency test kits. What a hot life

she lied, she cuckolded him, betrayed him and disrespected him. and he just accepted it. cuck.

older makes the AIDS treatments cheaper and death not take so much of your lives. Isnt it great knowing you are married to an unfaithful wife?

xxxxx

Vomit! Vomit!

Why in the world are these people married? Her reasons are obvious but his are a complete mystery. I wonder if she fucks other men when he's not around? I would guess she does, given that she feels free to do whomever she wishes.

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The writing here is average, there's no plot to speak of, it's not exciting unless you're into cuckoldry, and the characters are too fantastic to be believable.

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Bad fiction this is. Here's a twenty-five for your effort and I thank you.

BAD - nothing else to say

Another pervert story. I still think there should be a separate category for pervert stories so readers don't have to waste the time it takes to find out the story is pure garbage. Is there something about the west coast that so many of the writers of these stories are from that area?

the Ct Yankee

This is the 3rd story I have reviewed tonight and I gave you a 25 because at least your horrid writing had sense enough to keep it to 1 page......changed my mind 00 as bad is bad.

If you did have some twirpy groupies they would be telling you it was hot.

You write of a pathetic wimp into male humiliation who only has one whore to pimp out - the mother of her children - probably not yours.<P>

So if your next wimp self cuckolding story is as good as this one just take it right to fetish where the few weak freaky pathetic men are waiting for you to make a fool of yourself again.

Yes sir-re-bob, WOW another CUCKOLD story. At least the cuck should get him some good pussy, not that used up slop that he gets when they go home, YUCK!!!!!!!! SLOPPY what 4ths, 5ths, or how many she takes all day!!!!!!!! But hey it's not my story now is it........

Paul

Unprotected sex with unknown numbers of strangers and husband happy??

The best way to make people from moving away from your story is by telling that its fiction..

Are you a 4 year old? Idiot. Clearly written by a flamer.

Cuck and whore stories are the pits.

What a diseased selfish vile wore she turned out to bee