All Comments on 'The Green Room Ch. 01'

A wonderful collection of auralism derived interludes of life as a musician! This being my first of your stories to read; won’t be my last. I like your styles and the visuals your words provided my mind… Although not part of the stories I especially the visual of one-handed typing of your works; might consider voice to text program, freeing (lol) up both hands… Yes, your work should be a release and most importantly please YOU! “F” the grammar police! However, the best way I’ve found to improve is to listen to your writing. Being dyslexic I use a text to speech program imbedded in windows to listen to LE stories. I also find it a great way to edit my normal day-to-day writing. Really, only one constructive suggestion I have to say is I wish each chapter in this story had a unique title; at first listening to them at first was a little confusing, physically reading might be different… 5-stars.

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