All Comments on 'The Halloween House Ch. 01'

Excellent piece of writing. I loved your exacting descriptions and the bits of humour thrown in such as being a juice box which made me picture a bunch of juice boxes running around taking care of whatever things a juice box would handle. Every now and then one of the juice boxes would stroll by an alley and get pulled in while the aggressor tries to get their straw in his mouth to drain them and see the juice box crumple up and lay still in the alley. I would love to read more of this wonderful story. Thank you for posting it.