by BelicusDea
Loving this story so far.
One odd thing that hurts the writing, at least to my dialect, is the way you use the word sequels when I think you mean consequences.
My 2 cents
Great story. 5/5 stars. More, more.....lol Thanks for your time and your imagination.
Great book. I can just imagine the sort of things i would do if i hd a book like this.