All Comments on 'The HLA Elimination Chamber'

Solid first story. I loved the creativity with the match type. Nice touch with Vince booking it as all-blondes, I like putting little Easter Eggs in my stories too. Though I would've subbed out Carmella, who I don't think of as a blonde, for someone like Charlotte Flair, Scarlett, or Toni Storm, but that's just me.

I wish it was a little longer, however. I would've liked to have seen a bit more of a struggle. If all 6 wanted to win, we didn't see them try harder to avoid a position where they were stimulating another participant while not having themselves being stimulated. Of course I might be looking at this too literally. I hope you write more, especially along these lines.