All Comments on 'The Holiday'

Not possible to deposit a cheque for the mother into the daughters account. This suggests the story is not completely true! Four stars nevertheless.

Oh FFS! I'm not claiming to be au fait with international banking laws. its a fiction and a fantasy. What is more i despise people who comment without identifying themselves. I suggest you curb your tongue in future.

I can live with the banking arrangements, whether they are correct or not! What I was worried about was the fact that Laura was 18 but had been her mums lover for three years.

That aside I was captivated by the story of the daughter being the Dom and the mum the pet; it would have been useful to have read more about how this relationship had developed rather than just stating how it now was. Nevertheless this mother daughter relationship always gets me interested and I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter and where Tansy will fit in.

Alisa_Craig,

What's with the hostility? The original commentator brought up something that stand out to them. You disagree fair enough but to despise someone is cruel. If the person made a personal attack I'd understand but that's not what happened here. In the future breathe before you send some to the curve.

Be Well Alisa_Craig

Beautiful, the joys of the Caribbean and those we play with. A great start, I am excited to read more very soon. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟