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All Comments on 'The Homecoming I Desired'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great Start

For a first-time writer, this is very good. Keep up the great work!

WinterBlueAbbyWinterBlueAbbyabout 15 years ago
Amy is a very lucky woman

to be treated to such passion and desire when Jack comes home. This story is well written and brings a blush to my cheeks as I imagine myself in her shoes.

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