All Comments on 'The Hot Tub'

So what was the point of Linda in this story? Four people with only three really participating? It doesn't mesh. It would have been better written as a straight threesome.

Shy wife struck by the martian skank ray. It never fails. Next story husband gets hit by a martian cuck ray.

This is a good start on what could become a very good story...

...give some thought to picking up from here, and having Linda also enjoy a threescore, even if you don't take it all the way to a full swap.

Great writing skills, very descriptive and believable...

...4 stars as it stands

Wouldn't work for me. I could be hard as a rock with anticipation but as soon as a dude puts his hands on my "Pepe" I'd be soft in half a second

Not near as good as your previous two

poor linda, I hope she gets a little of the real thing soon.

Fun little fantasy, and well written. We can put the ‘prostrate’ typo down to spellcheck.

If the description says "shy wife" you expect a shy wife ...which this wife was the exact opposite of shy. You should put warning in if there is any homosexual or bi content as it can turn off readers who aren't expecting it.

My wife and I have really enjoyed our hot tub over the years. It has been the catalyst for lots of sex. Both with couples and with select singles.

Skank didn’t stay shy for long.

Linda didn't get hers

Hot story

Great real life story , let the adventures continue

Yes, nothing about her behavior reads as shy. I would say the opposite.

Nice descriptive story.

A nice hot and naughty story. I put it on my read to my wife list.