All Comments on 'The House on Cherry Tree Drive'

I really like your plot line, but dude you need an editor in the worst way. I am far from a grammar nazi, but this was almost unreadable. I'm sorry, I only related it a 3. The plot line and your imagination kept it to a mediocre rating and not dropping farther. Get yourself an editor and you'll see a vast improvement. Don't get discouraged and keep trying. 3/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham