All Comments on 'The Hunt Pt. 02: Back at the Cabin'

Thought you said there would be aftercare? A shower is not aftercare but prep for round two. You make this obviously consensual. It's still a bit harsh for me. I would like a greater feeling for the emotions involved from both partners. There is a clinical tone to your description that is feeding the feeling of harshness.

Keep it going very good read so far, can hardly wait for more.