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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great premise but a little more detail in the scene would be good

LaurasLibraryLaurasLibrary12 months agoAuthor

Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it. As a new writer, and new to this site and format, I'm still exploring how to write. But hopefully, story by story, I will find my voice:-)

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Full time working mother with extensive hobbies. Leader, lover, writer, traveler, kinkster, feminist, bad ass, smart, funny, bossy, submissive. My stories are based on a mix of experiences and fantasies, both my own and those of my partners. I started out with erotic non-fict...