All Comments on 'The Incubus's Heart Ch. 08'

I really like this series! Godwin is fantastic!

whew 5 hours later I'm caught up and am anticipating more chapters! Chip must pay for what he's done and no one has checked in with Josh since she got kidnapped and I hope, hope hop, he is okay. I could tell something would be going down with Chip the way Kennedy described him those few chapters ago.

I really really love how you incorporate the senses into these chapters, especially smell. I think that's what takes all your scenes to the next level and make them extraordinary. It's a 3-D type of writing that puts a reader there. I hope you write published books, you have a good talent for writing.