All Comments on 'The Infection Ch. 02'

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

Great stories

It would help to visualize if you gave some info on how the girls look sooner and it would probably help your numbers to include some tags like transformation and bimbofication but you're of to a great start!

zach_johnson over 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks

Thanks for the advice! I didn’t even think of tagging it. I’ll keep that in mind for the next chapter. Maybe I’ll even go back and edit if I can.

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