All Comments on 'The Janitor Pt. 04: Virgin Cheer Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

sabrina or brittany? you do need an editor!

LitCritLitCritabout 1 year ago

It really helps if you proofread your stories before you post them. You might have noticed that "Sabrina" turned into "Brittany" halfway through. Otherwise, fair to middlin' .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story. Hope there will be more soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A good story can rise above a couple of careless errors, and this one does!

Great story, friendly bondage, hot action!

Waiting for your next, road warrior!

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