All Comments on 'The Jewel of Desire Ch. 05'

Another great chapter in this evolving epic tale. Can't wait to see where Carl takes his growing harem and how he repays those that the to wrong him and his. JT

How about getting some students involved?

Like the story!

Please continue, it's very good!

When you make speech bold, or italics, it makes the story much harder to read. Just simple question marks is enough. It was a good story, but the special formatting was completely unnecessary and kept jarring me out of the story.

this is a really great story and you are off to a great start I can't wait to see what happens next. it's been over a year since the last post so hope to see several chapters in the near future.

I love it.

I heard that you were turning it into a novel and have finished several more chapters. Will you post here for feedback?

I like the formatting. I like the story line. I like it all. But... given the Dean Summer situation, don't you think it's time Carl & Dee acquired themselves a butler? It must be annoying for Carl to have to answer the door all the time, especially when there's only one of him and such a lot of sluts... Also, time for some sluts to get pregnant?

Time for the Dean to see the gem and be persuaded to serve up his ass to Carl and the ladies as well.

Hey pls continue this story

Heym where did the story go to, ... the read was getting so good, ... ;-) TTFN

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!