All Comments on 'The Journey of David and Becky Ch. 04'

by OllyT

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sooner or later, this “journey” will end badly for David. Hope he enjoys lots of sex when he’s single and that his next wife isn’t an evil whore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Man do I LOVE this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, I loved the buildup to Becky giving relief to David. It was a well written and meaningful description of how a couple falls in love. Now, Becky is not being a loving wife to David even though she says she is doing it for him. A load of bull pocky for sure but this is expected in this category. One wonders when David will wake up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So much tension in the buildup for the great event coming next Tuesday! Half of the excitement of any trip is the planning and anticipation, isn’t it?

Hope the trip, er the great event lives up to the buildup. For her and for him. There’ll be some surprises I bet. J.

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