All Comments on 'The King's Concubine'

It was well-enough written, but the events described belonged in a different category. It was just unpleasant.

and Toi Yer is supposed to mean something to the women to him or to us?

Try again after you read some more stories and get an editor.

I hope you continue the story, I enjoyed it.

but a much too liberal use of exclamation marks. They were very distracting.

When do we get to see more?