All Comments on 'The Ladder's Forbidden Appeal'

I liked the setup. The acknowledgement that they shouldn't have was sexy. I would have liked to see her dwelling in that thought longer, unable to stop herself though. Nice touch not having her shaved too.

re: BgDaddy

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you liked it. I hinted at some of that inner conflict in my description of their conversation over coffee, though that was after the fact. I get the appeal of shaved pussy on younger women but older, mature women always seem much more appealing with some hair down there. And it just seems that a mother in-law wouldn't be the pussy shaving type.

“Your pussy lips are fuller and fleshier. You have such a fucking sexy pussy, Milly. I like the original even better than the copy." You read that and decided to publish anyway? Jesus dude. Find another midlife crisis hobby, writing is not it.

I like the storyline. Need to find a way to get his wife/daughter involved. Will make a nice family unit

Nah, way too "wham bam thank you ma'am" and no subtlety at all. The usual spelling mistakes, but we all do those. IMHO not worthy of an 'H' sorry.

re: Anonymous

That is terribly awkwardly worded and I shouldn't have.

As to my motives for writing - So, that's your amateur psychoanalysis and yet you posted it anyway?

re: tallman441

Thanks. I don't see wife and daughter getting involved in the special secret between George and Milly, though they may take some risks at being discovered by either. Now, George's own mother finding out and getting jealous might make a good story.

re: TallManReinvented

I'm sorry the story let you down.

Short and sweet - I liked it. 4 stars. For me, a 5 star story has more length and depth (characters and plot). Also, try to avoid reliance on CAPITALS and exclamation marks for dialogue impact. Use descriptions to do this for you e.g. "... her words frenzied, .voice several octaves higher than normal."

re: Amsterdam

Thanks for the comment. I try to make the writing better in each new story and suggestions like this help.

Love mother-in-law fuck stories.