by katestyle
Breaking your story up into chapters this size is tantalising. It's refreshing to read something written with a good sense of wordsmithing, so it's no surprise you've been writing for a few years...
I'll wait to read the next chapters....
Fabulous tease, really hope theres more teasing stories to come...
And soon
Absolutely brilliant second part.
I again enjoyed reading this very well-thought, well-crafted story.
Looking forward to more of your writing.
Do the write thing!
5stars.
You deserve more.