All Comments on 'The Lapdog Ch. 03'

It is a very good read and I liked the d/s light relationship of the characters. It then turned very dark at the end of this chapter. it will be interesting to see where you go.

Wrong category: this is nonconsent/reluctance

Thanks very much for the anon compliments that people have been sending me! In answer to someone's question, yes, there's going to be more Lapdog, I'm just being really slow about doing it :) . There will be five chapters when it's done.

More please!

Well, it was going so well, but then when I read that the slave laws do not permit permanent changes to the slave's body, it turned a bit dark. Someone could bring charges and things would have to change. Well, the skin will always be a problem but everything else could be changed back. Oh well, it is a nice story and Carla has not caused any real pain. So far, Carla has been nice to Lisa and that is a good thing. I really hate to see anyone torture an animal that is helpless. I like the idea that Lisa's voice can be changed from time to time.

I really love how you maintain the story and don't push events too fast. It's third part of series and Lisa only starting to understand how she like her new life.

You ate very talented and could make money on erotic books for sure