All Comments on 'The Latticed Gate Ch. 05'

That was very unexpexted...the end I mean. All that Elle has gone through and only vaguely Jake amends verbally for only some of his behavior but his actions are no different. I think him returning to Elle shows his devotion...I know this is her story but Id like to know more about Jakes thoughts...maybe years down the road a look at their lives.

I love this series... The emotions it captures from both parties is astounding. I also would love to hear more of Jakes story.

Obviously, you are taking this to heights I didn't see. You have two troubled lovers, what will happen, only you know. A beautifully written story, great characters, more emotion then most anything on this site. IF this continues, I will devour every word. Thanks for something that is not just another run of the mill sex fest!