All Comments on 'The Lesbian Maker Ch. 03: Conversion'

Nice story. Thanks. Hope you continue with your next chapter of lesbian “hunger games”

Love the story. Excellent writing and great story-line. You did wonders creating the characters and the way Claudia was converted. Mary and Tom were important players but kept at an effective distance to make the story work. Cannot wait for future chapters to see what Mary does to push Claudia.

The story is good, but is really let down by the poor grammar. It needs a good editor, otherwise it will remain too painful to read in its entirety.

i like the story idea, and wish it was better formatted. keep it up.