All Comments on 'The Lesser Portal Ch. 03: Morwena'

Love the Lesser Portal stories! Tastefully written period piece that shows women love anal too!

I was delighted with the author's beautiful use of language unmarred by poor grammar and spelling. It is so hard to find in these dark days of shoddy work hurriedly done and poorly edited. My mind cannot seem to help itself from stumbling and tripping over each instance so that it often emerges battered and bruised. You, however, laid a path carefully smoothed and decked with such creative metaphors that I was able to soar through this piece twice while hanging on each delicious word. Both times I was devastated when the fascinating images invoked began to fade and I had to face the travesty of the end.

Rest assured, dear sir, I will be eagerly seeking out more of your unequivocal work!

LMJ

Thank you both. Miss Marie, I am flattered by your extended praise, and delighted that my labour in polishing my little bagatelle has been worthwhile for one reader at least.

Again, well done, albeit, brief. I did quite enjoy the original version, though. Could you please repost it, perhaps as Ch 3a…?

Thank you, Anon. Chapter 4 may turn out an acceptable substitute, when I get round to writing it.