All Comments on 'The Light Between the Trees Ch. 05'

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joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking11 months ago

So glad she's kicked Travis to the curb.

Also, the AI bit probably isn't your creative focus, but I do like the meeting scene. It feels so true to what little I know of big tech: the AI finding an unintended solution, the vast moral implications, the (so far only hinted but in my mind inevitable) decision to chase the next earnings call at all costs. Sorry, I have an axe and it's been ground nice and sharp.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodle11 months ago

I hated this because she’s an idiot.

I wouldn’t feel sorry for her if she disappears permanently.

MrArcherMrArcher11 months ago

Great character development. I like that Covalent gives her the option to refuse. Can't wait for more.

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