by Bumpinguglies
I've enjoyed this series of stories up until now, but this one has a problem. In the final scene, where our hero fucks Mrs. Porteous, while Mr. Porteous gets his rocks off with Mrs. Richards, you have two women, and two men, without any names used to reference them. You wrote it, so you know who is doing what with who, but your readers are going to be confused. Use your characters' names, please
Omg absolutely red hot, the lucky fucker permanently drunk drunk on cunt juice and wallowing in cunt and cunts, omg so sucking fucking hot debauched and depraved. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.