All Comments on 'The Local Girl Ch. 02'

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Naughtyboi1981Naughtyboi1981over 2 years ago

Loved it. Great story. When do you think the next chapter will be out?

holeinjolaholeinjolaover 2 years ago

Great story. Looking forward to more parts.

MiloXartsMiloXartsover 2 years agoAuthor

I'm glad you liked it. I plan to publish the third part in February.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like the Story. You swapped sometimes the namens and called Amber Amy. Over all i would rate 4.5 Stars, so it's 5 from me. Good Job, go on like that.

MiloXartsMiloXartsover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for letting me know. I found the mistakes and corrected them. I hope the dictated version will be published quickly.

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