All Comments on 'The Lollipop'

What a joy! Simple insightfully revealing with such humour. Great fun.

A fun-filled little Christmas tale, Jackie. You made me smile with your idea of how to pass the time in The Garden of Eden. Serpents? Who needs serpents when you've got your fingers. Another five stars for your collection.

Just wonderful!

wonderful little read! This is the first story of yours I have read, but I will definitely be reading more,

Absolutely wonderfully and enticingly descriptive, and the Beethoven 'OST' is truly inspired - I'll never listen to it the same again! ;)

Would love to see you in those little pink panties

Cute. However, "labia lips" is redundant, labia being the Latin root for the word, labia. Just a Christmas trifle ;)

Surely Santa will know if you’ve been naughty or nice. Yes, short and delightfully raunchy, but wonderfully hilarious moments of self indulgence. I’ve enjoyed so many of your pieces and this was no exception.

I enjoyed the dilemma in the story

@pcman1950 thanks for the feedback.

Delightful new twist to Santa snacks!

Beautifully presented in a wonderful descriptive wrapping, I loved it...

loved your story....stories of girls climaxing is always sooper

Nice story. Although I kept thinking that poor girl is going to have a yeast infection after that!

@anon haha maybe I should have added a disclaimer - don't try this at home kids!

Well done. You are an excellent writer, great timing.

I guess college had left me with a weird fetish, I didn't realize existing! 5* for the intension and also now I know why she used that fungocidal foam wash after!

Hi Jacky, great story and I totally enjoyed it. Absolutely believable too, which, to me at least, shows that you nailed it :)

What a lovely way to spend Christmas Eve .

I can imagine other girls doing that

Written so very professionally that I almost ignored my hope of what might happen, but you didn't disappoint. How hot, how creative! And wouldn't it be fun if she had someone to share sucking that lollipop? I'd volunteer, I really would.

Wow…I will never look the same Way on a lollipop again😅👍

Beautifully written - thank you.

A 5-star gem.

Nice!

What a fun little story. What else could you say… desperate times call for desperate measures. Lol. Who here hasn’t used something within reach they probably shouldn’t have to satisfy their… needs. Lol.

Thanks again.

Rose Monroe 🌹