All Comments on 'The Lost Boy Ch. 16'

too much plot with characters we dont remember

felt like ages to read another chapter , can't wait for more !! . please keep going . thanks .

Love this latest chapter. Not as dark as some of the more recent ones, which I appreciate. It's nice to see people smiling and enjoying affection as well as amazing sex. But the dark part is still there and keeping us on our toes. Keep up the great work Damien baby...

Kisses from

Diane

Thank you very much for liking it :)

And other guy, if you think there's too much plot for a 16 chapter story, then run along for you are not welcome here :D

Love this story and as always you delivered. Dont listen to the people bitching about too much plot. I personally love some good character development.

I can't get enough of this. I love how the plot is developing and can't wait to find out what happens next. Anyone complaining about to much plot should read any of the billion other stories on the site. I personally love your writing for the plot just as much as the great sex scenes. And this new side of Ian bot very interesting, and a little scary lol. Please keep up the great work and thank you for sharing this wonderful story. :)

You are fucking killing it, son. Your consistency and your development as a writer has been top notch, your shit is amazing and I am very proud of the quality work you are cranking out.

Shit reminds me of myself when I could crank out 30 pages a night, good times.

But your consistent stream of releases makes me look bad, so I'm gonna have to bust your knees. Just business.

Thank yooou! :DDDD I swear I feel like a fangirl every time you comment on my stuff xD

I'm trying my best to provide for my commissioners and I'm glad that everyone's happy so far :3 and nuuuuu! Do not harm mah legs

Dude this whole story phenomenal and I cannot wait for the next chapter, stay safe, stay happy, and good luck

I have no idea how wasn’t aware that this chapter came out for like two months but I’m extremely freakin happy that found out now. Love this character development we’re getting for melody and it made me really happy to see Ian happy with Liline again. Can’t wait for the next chapter