by TheTask
I can't wait... I want to know what he's going to do to make things interesting. As always your writing is great.
I like it more and more. The plot keeps developing and it is not just sex sex sex. Just like a good story.
Could have done without the items in parentheses, specifically the "I'm the author, deal with it" and the "<----Oxymoron." Completely unnecessary and very much out of place.
Other than that, not much to point out that I haven't already. Still a good story, and I'm still going to read it all.
"Ha im the author here" just about burst out laughing there. I am loving your series.