All Comments on 'The Lost Lord Ch. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Very nice cant await 4 more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very good

I can't wait... I want to know what he's going to do to make things interesting. As always your writing is great.

biggwhiteybiggwhiteyabout 11 years ago
It gets better and better

I like it more and more. The plot keeps developing and it is not just sex sex sex. Just like a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Great story so far. Can't wait to see how this progresses

Jedi_KhanJedi_Khanabout 11 years ago
One thing...

Could have done without the items in parentheses, specifically the "I'm the author, deal with it" and the "<----Oxymoron." Completely unnecessary and very much out of place.

Other than that, not much to point out that I haven't already. Still a good story, and I'm still going to read it all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Breaking the 4th wall

Nice touch there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

"Ha im the author here" just about burst out laughing there. I am loving your series.

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