All Comments on 'The Lost Lord Ch. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

"Ha im the author here" just about burst out laughing there. I am loving your series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Breaking the 4th wall

Nice touch there.

Jedi_KhanJedi_Khanabout 11 years ago
One thing...

Could have done without the items in parentheses, specifically the "I'm the author, deal with it" and the "<----Oxymoron." Completely unnecessary and very much out of place.

Other than that, not much to point out that I haven't already. Still a good story, and I'm still going to read it all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Great story so far. Can't wait to see how this progresses

biggwhiteybiggwhiteyabout 11 years ago
It gets better and better

I like it more and more. The plot keeps developing and it is not just sex sex sex. Just like a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very good

I can't wait... I want to know what he's going to do to make things interesting. As always your writing is great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Very nice cant await 4 more

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