All Comments on 'The Lust Saga - Prologue'

Love it. Really enjoyed reading this, looking forward to more ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ . Switches between past and present tense mid-paragraph a couple of times, found that distracting. Was the plan to have the oracle portion all in present tense and everything else in past?

Ditto dttoma: It's a good start, but you'll want to afford a proofread or two. Tenses keep shifting and Jinx becomes Jax. That said,

"Once over, she'll have clarity so powerful, she'll be able to make out parts of the future."

This is one of the most brilliant spoofs I've ever read. XD