All Comments on 'The Machine'

The editing is terrible. Made it hard to read. When I already had trouble reading it by paragraph 2, I wondered how the rest would go. This is the last sentence of paragraph 2: “that wouldn't be her only moan as he pulled the chain her mouth towards his dick.” A few paragraphs later, this sentence, “He knew she would be able to keep this toy In long but wanted to reminder that he was the owner of this spot.”

Go back and EDIT. It makes the storyline useless if it’s not a readable story!

I have no idea if the actual story is good or bad as I couldn’t read any further.

5 months from the previous comment and no one has fixed this? Please do better.