All Comments on 'The Maid'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wrong 'Tense'!

Also, I cannot abide 'stories' where the writer tries to make out that the Reader is/was personally involved!

Since the Reader knows that he/she was not involved it makes the 'story' a waste of time, since it is in no way believable!

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