All Comments on 'The Making of a PokeSlut 03 - Tentacruel'

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SNEZ_WritingSNEZ_Writingover 2 years ago

Another great entry in this series! Really enjoy the corruption element you're leaning into here. Thanks for putting so much time and effort into this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am really looking forward to see where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Possibly have someone grammar and spell check your stories. I was maybe half way through the story and it was hard to follow in some places

tabettstabettsover 2 years agoAuthor

Anonymous, are you for real? or is this some terrible trolling? If you have any actual issues you'd care to point out, please do so as I put a lot of effort into making sure grammar/spelling etc is correct in my writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Any idea when the next part is coming out, loving it so far.

tabettstabettsover 2 years agoAuthor

currently working on part 4, with a basic outline for parts 5/6 in place. if youre interested, i'm also working on another futa story but this time it's good old elf vs orc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was very well written and a lot more exciting than I expected!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story an update on when the next one comes out

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Would hsve likeed to see Tentacruel iuse it's Ultrasonic Blast to subdue Casdie and his pincers to hold her.

Tentacruel hasc 10 Motile (main/large) tentacles.

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Previously worked on Captions, Phone/Text based stories and even a visual novel. Now I'm trying my hand at actual short stories. Feedback is always appreciated. :)