All Comments on 'The Making of a PokeSlut 06'
by tabetts
- 8 Comments
JAFCritic34 months agoInteresting premise! I am only faintly familiar with the Pokémon universe, so for me this story was an introduction to the characters.
(I’m assuming that you based your story off the tv show?)
For me, it was a new take on mind control and body modification storytelling. I’m curious if you intend to add more in the future. I think the female Pokémon would like to their own stories too.
That said, I think you did a fine job with this one. Thank you for sharing and I hope to read more from you in the future.
LH_reads4 months agoA really great series! I hope you're not done writing on Literotica.
If you're not planning to continue with what happens to Melanie, how would you feel about others writing it?
QueenieRose4 months agoRandomly checked to see if you’d posted any more and super glad to see you have!! This was THE hottest one of all of your stories, I was enthralled. Super, super hot!
Anonymous4 months agoPlease write more! I loved this series, and can't wait for more in this universe!
wicked_guava4 months agowhole series is amazing!! would love a follow-up with melanie. you have a gift
SNEZ_Writing3 months agoWhat an incredible series!!!
Can't wait to read what you right next! (Though I hope it's a PokeSlut spinoff!)
Anonymous3 months agoGreat story. Would love to read what happens with Melanie. Since she seems to be a different type of PokeSlut.
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