All Comments on 'The Man's Will'

I would say that this is a very good start, with hopes that you continue to develop it further. Thank you!

Well written, few errors, interesting and erotic. Hope you write a lot more stories.

So far quite good and so far you are indeed Possibly_Trustworthy. Many more single and married women unknowingly require the Man's attention. Will he bless them with his presence?

Great start. Well written. Thank you.

Great first story. Very erotic with a pleasant sense of mystery.

Sexy, hot and horny. What a great way to start the day.

Looking forward to more of your work.

Very well done. Keep up the good work!