by Cum4theCumGod
Good premise.
A bit automatic re sex.
Could have used more details. And more teasing. And more dialog about what he was doing to her, and what hed be doing next.
The whole scene-setting with the bartender was wasted, for me at least. Nothing came of it other than getting her a bit horny.
And you wrote: "...tight-knight staff..." You meant TIGHT KNIT.
Four stars.
i enjoyed your story as it wasn't as wild and untruthful as most. i hope Quinne and Jordan have more adventures