All Comments on 'The Master Gene Ch. 10'

Love this story Arc.. glad ur still writing it..

I just found this story and it seems to be going great. Can't wait to see if the head of the Hospital mis Derrick's or his sisters slave.

Oops lol that's why plans never go unchainged once activated

Can you like retcon Ben and his actions and or kill him off because I don’t like him or grandpa the only one with slaves should be Derrick because he is the protagonist and doesn’t treat them like slaves if you do anything like that with Ben or grandpa I’m not going to read the rest of the series

Pretty great story!! Would be neat to see if there becomes incest or like, Derrick kills or enslaves Ben and his grandpa. Follow your heart and create what you want, but if you are trying to create Ben as a villain you're doing good.

To the anonymous commenter who asked to Retcon Ben, unfortunately I can't do that and for a good reason, Ben if you haven't figured it out yet, is the Villain of this story, with Grandpa as a second antagonist. It isn't really a spoiler to say that at some point soon in the story Derrick is going to discover what Ben has been doing and when he does there's going to be a confrontation between the two.

So the fact that you hate Ben and Grandpa is kind of the point.

I came back to see if you responded and good to see you saw it and responded in a civil way unlike a lot of people on this site both reader and writer alike and that’s a little understandable why there like that then I thought it was just going to be on of those instances where the author jumps the shark and makes it about rape or femdom or what even what it wasn’t that like that a paragraph ago

Excellent job of making gramps and Ben in to characters you really hate. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, but a part of me is hoping Karen finds a cure and gives it to the lesbians so they can turn on Ben.

"After all, if he was going to get anything done today at all, he'd need to finish satisfying his girls soon."

Such a considerate master.

So we have a college aged Master with 5 slaves now. At least Karen will have the support of her boss once the fallout is complete.

I knew we had two antagonists but now we have some real bad guys. A good mystery is nothing without some interesting villians.

Good villain build up. Not a fan of rape stories, but I see the necessity for the Ben villain arc. I think you covered it well without wallowing in it.