by Dishwasher1004
"caramel delights"? (penultimate para)
Should this be "carnal"? Kiara's skin tone might be caramel, but "carnal" makes better sense.
Enjoying this immensely; hoping for some New 'new' chapters soon.
I've been delaying the new chapters because I'd hit a massive case of Writer's block and didn't want to put anything more out until I could guarantee a better rate of release. Fortunately I'm currently finished with the main story and only have to finish writing the epilogue, so actual new chapters should be coming soon.