by farless
There are aspects of this story that are tremdously hot....the idea that the author is pushing is that of submission. However, it's hard to imagine his climaxing from a hard fucking if it is so painful that he's crying the whole time. I was fucked by a guy with a big dig ONCE and it hurt tooo much when he shoved it deep lessening my ultimate pleasure. It would be more balanced if the guy cared a bit more about his boy even if he stayed on top!
I loved the story. it seems as a brief story of a guy with his boyfriend and how the relationship progressed till now.