by BeachGurl2
Your works are quickly becomming my favorites...I think you really understand the connection between love and trust...you stories are romantic, erotic and so real. I think both this story and "Wifes Submission" belong in erotic couplings category...but that's just my thought...thank you for a beautiful read.
I'm sure you're becoming a favorite of many readers, and rightfully so. Great job, great story.
Fantastic story very erotic and sensual You're definitely the best right now and I cant wait till I get a chance to read your other new one ttfn Larry
Wow, I read this and many thoughts ran through my head. Very damn good, maybe it's not having read anything by you in a while but I am blown away, really again since I've been blown away for a while now by your work. ;)
...and noticed i didn't leave a comment last time! Love the passion. Very hot.
I liked your story so much I say let's act it out sometime or at least use it for a guideline ....my imagination likes yours...CRUDAREALIDAD@aol.com
from Sun Tan Guy... Hun.. I would gladly be the guy in this story any time.. While I am a switch, it would be an honor to be your dom for a night. I might never want to be a subbie ever again with a sub like you in this story!!
Great great story babe..
STG
Great writing and and an excellent storyline combined to make this a story I will long remember.
It reminded me of the time I met a woman that I had known from a bulletin board; albeit with a different ending than your story. She was gorgeous, smart, and I could have listened to her talk all night. At one point when she was standing in front of me in a coffee shop, I had a strong urge to come up behind her, wrap my arms around her, and pull her close to me. I didn't though; I was ever the gentleman. She was going through a tough time with her ex and I decided not to complicate her life further. I often wonder if I will ever see her again.
Thanks for the great story and the walk down memory lane.
Very vivid. I know a hot desert girl. Make that a hot girl in the desert.