All Comments on 'The Midas Experiment - Ch. 01'

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dvmrdvmr12 months ago

Great Start to a series! Thank you.

twistedertwisteder12 months ago

Good start to a new series; looking forward to the continuation

Just fyi, a few typos... I.e. "click" should be "clique", "are town" should be "our town", etc.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

okay the boob sweat thing is actually a really hot addition. don't know if I've ever seen that before, but I like it

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Thanks for writing again.. JtL

AltruisticFiendAltruisticFiend12 months ago

lol, so when is Gloria introduced?

zena99zena999 months ago

The Boob Sweat addiction was interesting. Hopefully that is fully fleshed out in any future chapters.

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