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All Comments on 'The MILF Next Door Ch. 02'

by MineCraft040521

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KMB2476KMB24768 months ago

Outstanding sequel!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Decent, but I didn't finish the first page after noting an important missing "a" (the letter AS a word) following several punctuation issues.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Make a part 4

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Make a part 3

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Taking another read, I noticed more mistakes, including (I know) an extra word early on (LONG before Eva's entrance), which takes away from the heat of the idea, to say nothing of the situation itself!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

It's physically impossible for something to come out of that appendage, onto something else, but then land on the same appendage!

Even fiction needs reality!

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I love celebrities and I love writing, so it was only a matter of time before I started writing celebrity erotica.

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