All Comments on 'The Mind Control Ring Pt. 01'

typos and context are your enemies. work on that

English is obviously not your first language Good luck with your next story

Hmm.. do they sell this kind of ring on e-bay?

Note to self, proof read stories before uploading them! Apologies for the simple errors made! Will do better next time! 😂

More please, I enjoyed it very much.

It was a good quick to the point hot theme. Wasn't too fast and not too slow... just right.

while the story is a fun little fantisy/ it would be almost ipossible to have happen. nudity and fonication in a gym would be shut down,, or joined immediately,, depending on the culture of that gym.

Slofred m, that’s the whole point. It’s just fiction!